Snake Oil.
Journal Entry: Fri May 9, 2008, 10:12 PM
There's a flicker of light
Behind your eyes
And I've never seen that smile before
And I want to worship, please, adore
But the gag's drawn tight
The mouth is dry.
The world's a bazaar
With lives to buy
And I a liar, gypsy, thief
To dance for charms, to whore my grief
And sell it off in little jars.
We choke and gasp
You drain me dry
I drank your soul with bleeding lips
A spiral dance around our hips
You rip me raw
I hear you cry.
The world's a bazaar
To sell your soul
Decant your poisons one by one
The venom burns across my tongue
And draws me back into your arms.
There's a flicker of light
And a forked tongue
And I never read the label through
But that's what snake oil tends to do
So hold me close
My love, I'm done.
I'm actually quite pleased with parts of this (surprisingly). I suspect that next time I look at it I'll notice the myriad of faults, but for now, it will do.
Comments on this very welcome.
- Mood:
Screwed - Listening to: The seconds tick down.
- Reading: Rough drafts.
- Watching: my deadlines get closer.
- Playing: With knives.
- Eating: dead cow.
- Drinking: H2O.
Devious Comments
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PS~Hate you! (gods, that's from...what, grade 9? I feel so old now.)
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In here lies a tragedy....
My Sweethearts: =ShinotamaTakemuro*Miss-It-Girl
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Bikky:*mumbles*...nothing..*mumbles*
Wolf: *blinks* humping?!?
Bikky: *eyes go wide* NO! NOTHING!
((lol joys of rp :3 ))
Jamie: They have like FINGERS on their toes!
((Jamie talking about feet >.> ))
Belatedly!
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pray for rain, lose your name
and watch all of your dreams fall through
How are you?
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"Goth is a safe facade. Underneath it all,these monsters are still loveable. These monsters are us."-Susan Tyler Hitchcock, Teenage Frankensteins
It's always good to find someone else who likes JTHM and Edward Scissorhands as much as I do.
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"Goth is a safe facade. Underneath it all,these monsters are still loveable. These monsters are us."-Susan Tyler Hitchcock, Teenage Frankensteins
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miss la sol fa re mi
Loving your poetry, by the way.
beautiful so far...
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miss la sol fa re mi
Cheers for all the little commenty things on all my pics.
You need to put some more stuff up.
Say hi to Will for me.
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I would rent a tux and dance you around the moon
with hugs, kisses and other things that would make you blush
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